Half slept eyes
or the drunken feel
everything zooming
like life on the reel
the director maybe
forgot the script
and left us playing
"whose line is it anyway"
I was dancing
to the music to please
That feeling to me
was the meaning
but i dont want to hurt
anymore
Empty box of chocolate
still looks like you want it
Where did this rain come from
i am fully drenched
this shiver i cannot stop
but still i am enjoying the splatter
as if i have a choice
my house is so far away
Is this blood?.......
that has coloured me red
I dint understand :(
ReplyDeleteSo you posted this finally eh? I loved the way you have conveyed the connotation!
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even i didnt understand dis....feeling??
ReplyDeletei guess dere is something significant in d last 4 lines....
Sunil, Please elucidate :)
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ReplyDeleteWas just trying out a hand at abstract writing. There is nothing to mean in there - if you are searching for some meaning then you will not find any - every person can take a different meaning from it - and thats the ambiguity i wanted to create - all those whom i asked what the meaning was, gave a different answer.
Wonderful then, I felt a different thing every time i read it :) Keep Writing :)
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