Wednesday, April 29, 2009

10 steps from the edge .....

yesterday
i saw a man with closed eyes
who said he wanted to see
he said he wanted to go north
and staunchly started walking south.

the wind blew to stop him
the earth blocked the way
the rains told him to change
the sun burned his day

With eyes tightly closed
he claimed to be right
and that he was heading the right way
albiet without sight

If only he could read the signs
if only he would open his eyes
if only he accepts .........
coz the cliff ends after his next 10 steps

will he open his eyes and turn the right way????

3 comments:

  1. Man.... what a beauty!!!
    could it be more realistic???
    how many times there are omens and you fail to identify them. There are forces helping you all the time...all you have to do is, be receptive!!

    Excellent piece!!

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  2. Hey Nice one :)
    MBA join karke yahi lagta hai... apna engineering field kitna achha tha.. 1+1 = 2 ho hota tha...
    CGPA aaya mast, prof bole field continue karo... butttttt... mainein kahan dekha cliff-edge. chalta gaya.. hawa mein ud raha hoon - kab pair zameen pe girenge pata nahi.. jab tak ud raha hoon maje le raha hoon..

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